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Post by host14 on Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:11 pm

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Post by nomeradona on Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:05 pm

you seem getting the lighting now. although its too even for my lighting. did you use diffuse glow filter. i can see a bit of bloom. I also like the way you made your vertical lines parallel with the vertical of the picture plane.

nice blurry materials and i think you have an increased subdivision with your material.

did you use ambient occlusion. i can see some depths with your whites. introduce a bit of bumps. say with your tile grouts. also try to put some objects/components in the kitchen (inside cabinet shelf, top of the counter)
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Post by host14 on Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:03 pm

yes sir i did use ambient occlusion in this render,

I also used the bump layer sir for the tiles, maybe my settings is to low Neutral

sir what did you mean about (although its too even for my lighting)?

thank you for you comment sir nomer,


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Post by nomeradona on Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:17 pm

even lighting is different from dramatic lighting. dramatic lighting is a way where you play between light and shadows.. even lighting is just evenly distributed.
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Post by host14 on Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:39 pm

wow, thank you sir for enlightening me,

about the equipment's sir, next time ill put some sir,..

other else sir? thanks a lot sir this is really helpfull

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Post by nomeradona on Tue Oct 23, 2012 3:57 pm

your welcome...
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