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Post by MarkMuncada on Fri Oct 05, 2012 12:12 pm

critique my first night scene[img] [/img]

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Re: night scene

Post by nomeradona on Mon Oct 08, 2012 11:51 am

not bad at all. i like the vegetation and the use of foreground image.. just quick thing..

1. maybe the shadow coming from the interior a bit softer
2. introduce some elements inside the interior. curtain. cabinets..
3. trees maybe in the background a bit darker//
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Re: night scene

Post by MarkMuncada on Mon Oct 08, 2012 9:23 pm

nomeradona wrote:not bad at all. i like the vegetation and the use of foreground image.. just quick thing..

1. maybe the shadow coming from the interior a bit softer
2. introduce some elements inside the interior. curtain. cabinets..
3. trees maybe in the background a bit darker//
thank you sir nomer for the tips.

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