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Post by jkreguine on Thu Sep 06, 2012 4:31 pm

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Re: Please critique I need to learn more.

Post by 3d-edge on Sat Sep 08, 2012 12:33 pm

Lighting looks nice, rendering in general is fine in my opinion but consider the elements that make a render realistic, if realistic you want it. get more high-res materials and map them without obvious pattern repeats (like your fence). cloud map can be more realistic IMO.

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Post by nomeradona on Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:18 pm

i like the soft shadow, the curtain inside those windows and your plantation. although i would want to play more on adjusting the dark level to have a better contrast. the glass material i think needs attention together with the reflected sky.. also add dirt maybe. to clean to be true.
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Post by jkreguine on Mon Sep 10, 2012 2:25 pm

Hello guys!,

Especially to Sir Nomer, I will definitely follow your comments in my next project.

Sir Nomer do you have a tutorial on how to add dirt? or any technique on how to do it.

Thank you,

Jett

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