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Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by lobusta_86 on Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:14 am

Work in Progress Exterior Composition
Workflow: SU 8 + VFSU 1.49.03

Need comment for design, rendering and post processing.

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Thank you in advance!!!
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Post by Admin on Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:32 am

First of all Francis. I have to commend you on your improvement with visualization. Your handling of color pallette and rendering setting has progressed much. That is something to be celebrated. Another thing your use of greens, trees is excellent., you seemed getting good advises from Rhen Badando...

Rendering: You might want to consider the following:

- softening the shadows, by increasing a bit the size of the sun.
- increasing a bit the intensity of the sun.
- adding dirt a bit to the sidewalk and the fence.

Desing.. Im still not sure if the curve form in the middle with portruding concrete is effective. I feel there is not much rhythm in using elements. There is tendency of using different elements without repeating them. eg. The chamfered wall on the left with the circular column. To be effective if there is a repetition to the right (one storey only) then it will be more effective. There is always the tendency to create things alone with themselves thus endangering to call for attentions. SO ingat lang minsan...

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Re: Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by lobusta_86 on Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:27 am

Noted sir Nomer, i will take your advice, lot of things to workout pa, especially in design. I'm very thankful for your unending support and guidance. Very Happy
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Post by Admin on Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:50 am

your welcome as always francis..

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Re: Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by arqestevez on Sun Apr 01, 2012 9:09 pm

hey there.
well, design seems pretty good, i mean, i do not think i should critique it without knowing exactly what you meant to create and what the client expected, but about the rendering, i think you used a little bit too much difuse glow. perhaps some bump mapping in your walls would add some extra realism, and you can also add some dirt in photoshop.
i think the most important think is that you should change vray's default background for a more interesting sky picture.
great work anyway Wink
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Re: Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by nomeradona on Sun Apr 01, 2012 9:20 pm

Francis, I have seen the update design maybe you render it so we could see from there.
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Re: Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by lobusta_86 on Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:33 pm

arqestevez wrote:hey there.
well, design seems pretty good, i mean, i do not think i should critique it without knowing exactly what you meant to create and what the client expected, but about the rendering, i think you used a little bit too much difuse glow. perhaps some bump mapping in your walls would add some extra realism, and you can also add some dirt in photoshop.
i think the most important think is that you should change vray's default background for a more interesting sky picture.
great work anyway Wink

Thank you sir, noted, i will work out for it. Thank you for the tips.

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Re: Need for Comment on Design and Rendering

Post by lobusta_86 on Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:35 pm

nomeradona wrote:Francis, I have seen the update design maybe you render it so we could see from there.

Sir nomer, that is another design, i will post the update here, Thank you again!
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