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Post by arkiranz on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:07 am

im still on the process of practicing interior rendering and your comments will help me improve.
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thanks in advance..
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Re: critique my work

Post by Admin on Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:12 am

First of all I must say your not only good with exterior set-up but your interior rocks. Based on my recollection this is the first interior I have seen from you. Excellent bro your attention to details is great. Excellent composition and matching materials. I think young visualizers should learn from you this trait.

Some things you might want to consider.

I think the cut-out image that you have added needs to be relighted. This is an interesting post from rendering tutorials http://renderingtutorials.blogspot.com/2012/01/relighting-cut-out-people.html

I can see some noise on those wood materials, i don't know if they are bump or really noise. What is your subdivision for your wood material?

For your handrail and metal, use round corner to chamfer them lightly. TO sharp I think.

As for design, I feel the thickness of those steps in your stair should be a bit thinner (slickier)

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Post by arkiranz on Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:36 am

nice to hear it from you sir..

i think those are really a noise, coz my subdivision is just only 8. so i should make it higher next time.

i forget to use round corner, thanks for reminding me.
and i think you got a point, maybe thinner steps would look good for the stairs..

thank you so much for your words sir. Smile
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Post by Admin on Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:46 pm

your welcome bro.

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